October Girl

Hmm, too short to really crit. But, I'll do my best. Um, well it didn't seem to flow to me, please edit it and find the right words. It sounds ...

Hello, I think this is very interesting. I'm so sorry to hear that has happened to you. I know what if feels like. The idea was brilliant and I loved ...

Oh! Good Job!!! That must be a great accomplishment>>>sorry if that's spelled wrong ^_^. -Max

I must agree with Mad on this subject please change it, then ask people to take you seriously.

This was very interesting, but not very detailed I have to think on it, I'm not exctly sure I like it or if I hate it... Sorry this Crit isn't ...

This poem was kind of confusing. But still I enjoed it, sorry theres nothing I can really say that's "helpful"

oh my goodness I'm completely in love with this poem! It's just so.... deep it does remind me of the song Bring me to Life. I don't know but I ...

Wow, this is really just..... wow. I like it alot. I won't point out your errors or mistakes because the others already have. But this is really good, you have ...

Wow, I really like this. I don't find many grammer errors so I can't exactly tell you you screwed up. Great poem very dramactic and very true. -Max

wow Alice this lyric was so beautiful! I ALMOST cried and usually I hate it when people have that effect on me. This was so good that I'm actually speechless. ...

It's not the best poem in the world but it isn't the worst. Sorry I don't have much more to say.

Yes, hello. Since Keek didn't exactly chew you out (not that I mean to) but please change the title the way it was meant to be written. "I luv him" ...

Wow, Linds! I loved it, but then again I am a sucker for poetry and lyrics... lol

wow, impressive. I think you did a pretty good job. I think you described your characters thoroughly and you made everything a perfect image in my mind. Good luck and ...

WOW... I'll tell you what a good way. -Max